Im sorry these things make me cringe. But from a person who doesnt vomit at parodies this seems really good.
Next time get it animated...
It's good but animated looks really professional. If you want to do this as a profession
eh year ago i just wanted to make a parodyYou could work on the lyrics quite a bit. Not only did you just rip off parts from the song without any changing, but your rhyme schemes were pretty basics and just sounded... off.
...? You ask for feedback so your getting feedback, your acting all lazy ;P.eh year ago i just wanted to make a parody
hahaHey! I remember you arent you from KoonKraft?[DOUBLEPOST=1451000552,1451000382][/DOUBLEPOST]Awhh... I looked in the description its sad to see it wasn't sung by you :/ I thought you were singing it...
its late :[...? You ask for feedback so your getting feedback, your acting all lazy ;P.