How does this mine look?

[Detox]

Hello MCM,

I am trying to get back into building, so today i created a pretty simply mine that is an abandoned mineshaft with cranes moving ores and a bridge and some other stuff. I was wanting to get feedback on it and see what i could add before putting it up for sale. All feedback is nice Please keep it friendly though, as I am getting back into building, not a professional minecraft builder.

With Shaders:


Proof I built:


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[ked]

Sweet.
GLWS (if your gonna)

 

[Detox]

Sweet.
GLWS (if your gonna)

Thanks and If i do sell it, the price will be like 5$ if that lol.

 

[Sinicle]

Use the smooth tool in world edit.

 

[ked]

Use the smooth tool in world edit.

Its a cave, nothing in a cave is generically smooth.

 

[Detox]

Use the smooth tool in world edit.

I was thinking about this, but then again, its more of a natural shaft. I get where you are coming from, but the earth isn't smooth and mineshafts in game aren't smooth either. But if others suggest it I will do it. Thanks.

 

[Sinicle]

I was thinking about this, but then again, its more of a natural shaft. I get where you are coming from, but the earth isn't smooth and mineshafts in game aren't smooth either. But if others suggest it I will do it. Thanks.

It just looks very world edited, caves are smooth they have flow this is just balls. GLWS though!

 

[The Golden Apple]

Looks quite ok, but if you dont mind I will give you some tips to improve it.
Add some ores into the mountains around the map, detail it up more and smooth out your mountains a little bit at some points.
You could perhaps mix the stone with another type of stone. Maybe detail up the structures a bit by adding stairs, different wood types,...

 

[Ivain]

while in a cave nothing is smooth, it is not blatantly visible that you used VS ball brushes, which is about as bad for a build as including notch trees+ is.

Since you used VS, try using /b bb on it, or maybe /b e melt.

 

[Detox]

It just looks very world edited, caves are smooth they have flow this is just balls. GLWS though!

Its voxelsniper, and the way the plugin generates its spheres. Sorry lol.

Looks quite ok, but if you dont mind I will give you some tips to improve it.
Add some ores into the mountains around the map, detail it up more and smooth out your mountains a little bit at some points.
You could perhaps mix the stone with another type of stone. Maybe detail up the structures a bit by adding stairs, different wood types,...

I see. I will take this into consideration, i am trying to get better at building, so this is my first thing created by myself. Thanks for the suggestions.[DOUBLEPOST=1462010592][/DOUBLEPOST]

while in a cave nothing is smooth, it is not blatantly visible that you used VS ball brushes, which is about as bad for a build as including notch trees is.

So what do you suggest? You are a very reputable builder and I have spoken to you in the past and respect your opinion.

 

[Ivain]

just edited my post to suggest a thing

 

[Detox]

just edited my post to suggest a thing

Okay thanks.

 

[Sinicle]

Its voxelsniper, and the way the plugin generates its spheres. Sorry lol.

I see. I will take this into consideration, i am trying to get better at building, so this is my first thing created by myself. Thanks for the suggestions.[DOUBLEPOST=1462010592][/DOUBLEPOST]
So what do you suggest? You are a very reputable builder and I have spoken to you in the past and respect your opinion.

I suggested the exact same things as him, but I guess I'm not respected? okay

 

[Detox]

I suggested the exact same things as him, but I guess I'm not respected? okay

Never said I don't respect your opinion, Don't blow it out of proportion.

 

[Detox]

Looks cool interested in joining a team? http://www.mc-market.org/threads/97699/#post-1115507

I appreciate the offer lol but I am no where near good enough of a builder to join a team.. lol

 

[Detox]

Use the smooth tool in world edit.

Looks quite ok, but if you dont mind I will give you some tips to improve it.
Add some ores into the mountains around the map, detail it up more and smooth out your mountains a little bit at some points.
You could perhaps mix the stone with another type of stone. Maybe detail up the structures a bit by adding stairs, different wood types,...

just edited my post to suggest a thing

Looks cool interested in joining a team? http://www.mc-market.org/threads/97699/#post-1115507

Made some changes, wanted to quote all of you who suggested stuff thus far and see what you think. Thanks again for all the feedback.

 

[Ivain]

much better. Its far from perfect still, but its a huge improvement.