How does this mine look?

[Detox]

Hello MCM,

I am trying to get back into building, so today i created a pretty simply mine that is an abandoned mineshaft with cranes moving ores and a bridge and some other stuff. I was wanting to get feedback on it and see what i could add before putting it up for sale. All feedback is nice Please keep it friendly though, as I am getting back into building, not a professional minecraft builder.

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Proof I built:


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[ked]

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Just wanted to point something out, I've never been at a mine but I really dont think mines have trees...

Also, level out the ores.

Diamond should be far down, coal at the top.

EDIT: Massive improvement none the less

 

[Sinicle]

Made some changes, wanted to quote all of you who suggested stuff thus far and see what you think. Thanks again for all the feedback.

So much better!

 

[Detox]

Just wanted to point something out, I've never been at a mine but I really dont think mines have trees...

Also, level out the ores.

Diamond should be far down, coal at the top.

The trees are added effects, just to fill space and give it more of a natural feel.

 

[Ivain]

Just wanted to point something out, I've never been at a mine but I really dont think mines have trees...

Also, level out the ores.

Diamond should be far down, coal at the top.

EDIT: Massive improvement none the less

without the trees it would be a lot more boring.
We're going for looks here, not realism. Realism in minecraft is boring most of the time

 

[The Golden Apple]

I personally would smooth it out even more at some points, and maybe try something like //re 1 60%1,20%1:5,20%1:6
Maybe ave different types of leaves in your trees?

 

[ked]

without the trees it would be a lot more boring.
We're going for looks here, not realism. Realism in minecraft is boring most of the time

We're going for looks here, not realism.

We're

 

[Ivain]

we as in the creator and people giving feedback. big deal much?

 

[Detox]

we as in the creator and people giving feedback. big deal much?

I appreciate the feedback .