Opinions on an intro made by me?

[UberStudios]

I am just looking for people's advices for my intro I uploaded on my youtube channel! Please tell me what you like about it etc.

Programs used:
C4D
Adobe After Effects
Sony Vegas 12.0

Time Spent:
C4D: 1.5 hours
Editing/Syncing: 2 hours

Thanks in advance

Intro:
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[UberStudios]

I like it! 7/10

How could I get that score higher

 

[UberStudios]

It seemed kind of drawn out too long, like almost pointlessly long. Cut the duration in half and it would be perfect!

Alright man thanks for the suggestion! Once I get more suggestions I will upload a V2

 

[Timed]

Sync

 

[UberStudios]

Sync

I will sync it in V2

 

[UberStudios]

Looks good man!

Great start!

Thanks a lot Any suggestions for V2 of the intro?

 

[UberStudios]

I would personally change the font, looks a bit kidlike idk how to explain it sorry haha

Any suggestions/examples that you think will look nice?

 

[UberStudios]

5/10
Camera is not synced, you have no smoke / particles
Camera movements are a bit shaky
No CC
Personally, I do intros, I don't know if this is good.

Ok I will take some of these into consideration.
I don't like using smoke due to the fact it takes away from the text.
I can try to smooth the movements, but they are pretty smooth due to the fact I use the circle object in C4D.
There is a CC on the background and a light color gradient over the text.
I am going to be syncing the intro in V2.
I will add a tiny amount of particles (or maybe none) because they take away from the text.


Thanks so much for the the suggestions

 

[Azenix]

I really like it I think its cool!

 

[UberStudios]

I really like it I think its cool!

Thanks Any suggestions?

 

[UberStudios]

camera not synced
song sync not good
4/10.
Suggestion When you open the C4D compostion on AE
Do not drag it on ur timeline double click the C4D composition
so The Camera is in the timeline also (it makes sync much better.)

Thanks for the information I will use it in the future
For V2 I will sync the crap outta it

 

[UberStudios]

Install Sapphire Plugins For Better Sync.
Install Magic Bullet Looks
Install RSMB for Smooth Intro
Install Twitch Makes Sync Smooth
Download polarfx leaked private lightroom (20x Better than other lightrooms.)

I don't have a lot of money for those

 

[Azenix]

Thanks Any suggestions?

I would but I'm not making intros yet so i cant scrutinize it accurately, good luck though!