Selling Spring Spawn!

[Synky]

Hello everyone!
Today I bring you a spring themed spawn! If you're interested leave a comment or message me. The spawn is only $5.
There are 4 portals and a short parkour course for players if they're bored in the lobby. The spawn is very good for smaller servers that are looking to start out with a nice spawn that isn't too big. Any constructive criticism is accepted. This is non-exclusive as of now. If you are the first buyer and you want it to be exclusive the price will be bumped up to $10.

Terms of Service:
- You may not resell this spawn.

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Proof I built it:

 

[BeingAmazing]

I am going to be honest here, and I want you to take this as constructive criticism. This is not worth 5$, more like 1$ if any. The reason being as there is hardly and structures and definitely no detailed structures, the terrain is bland and simple. Now, to make a lobby more interesting I first suggest coming up with a theme for houses/ buildings. make about 3 different houses all with the same theme, after that you base the terrain on the style and type of buildings. For example, buildings with thatched roofs (hay bales) look nice in a wheat field / farming landscape. also for terrain, don't make the cliffs super steep with one layer of grass, maybe make over hangs, add different block to the stone and grass (grass, green clay, gravel / stone, clay, cobble). any way good luck, hope this advice helps!

 

[Azorces]

This should be free tbh

 

[Synky]

I am going to be honest here, and I want you to take this as constructive criticism. This is not worth 5$, more like 1$ if any. The reason being as there is hardly and structures and definitely no detailed structures, the terrain is bland and simple. Now, to make a lobby more interesting I first suggest coming up with a theme for houses/ buildings. make about 3 different houses all with the same theme, after that you base the terrain on the style and type of buildings. For example, buildings with thatched roofs (hay bales) look nice in a wheat field / farming landscape. also for terrain, don't make the cliffs super steep with one layer of grass, maybe make over hangs, add different block to the stone and grass (grass, green clay, gravel / stone, clay, cobble). any way good luck, hope this advice helps!

Thank for the feedback! I'll use your tips in my next build!

 

[Ivain]

Erm, I think they mean use it here. With all due respect, you need a lor more practice before you can sell stuff on here.

I mean, this is fine for a low-budget build and since its cheap im sure it'll sell somewhat, but he does need to improve if he wants to get out of tiny-budgetland.