Thoughts on my videos?

[Whis]

I just uploaded my first video, will start talking in them just waiting for my new mic.

 

[Whis]

Too long GL tho!

Thanks! I will start editing them down to montages! Thanks for the feedback.

 

[MostlySnakes]

good for a test video but yeah nobody is going to watch a 20 min video unless it has awesome commentary

 

[Whis]

good for a test video but yeah nobody is going to watch a 20 min video unless it has awesome commentary

Alright. Just wanted to see how people like it, thanks

 

[Shroomy]

Try to make it like a 11 minute video, no one likes you watch long videos unless they're Fail Army videos.

 

[Boshns]

feedback:
- You used way too overused music
- Too long, no one will watch 23 minutes of just clips and music in the background
- Edit out the boring parts

 

[Whis]

Try to make it like a 11 minute video, no one likes you watch long videos unless they're Fail Army videos.

feedback:
- You used way too overused music
- Too long, no one will watch 23 minutes of just clips and music in the background
- Edit out the boring parts

Thanks.

 

[Cafe]

Music gets annoying, too overused
Instead of casual, which is not exciting, maybe try some competitive

 

[CoderAnthroMC]

I love your dedication, But maybe try to make the video shorter ? Up to you man

 

[Whis]

Music gets annoying, too overused
Instead of casual, which is not exciting, maybe try some competitive

I love your dedication, But maybe try to make the video shorter ? Up to you man

Thanks

 

[Whis]

New videos uploaded, Thoughts?

 

[Overlord]

it's ok, here are some points:

• shorter intro, people want to be in the action within 5 seconds, 7 seconds tops. 13 seconds or whatever you had was too long. cap it to 5-7.
• song starts immediately after, huge pitch change. ease it in, you want more discreet background music to be your first one
• pick less common/generic music. this song is too overused buddy
• change your music up
• less time baiting around, skip to the point when needed. you've got background music, it's meant to be a fast clip showing key moments. skip the crap like the wait time, spawn time, etc...

other than that, looking good. best of luck man.