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twinightcreep0

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Hey folks. Me again <3

I thought I'd turn to you lovely people for feedback on something I recorded yesterday:


For this one, I vision some slime-like mob creatures taking over or invading a city, perhaps?
Any thoughts or feedback much appreicated.

Twinight :)
 
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Very well done, I enjoyed it. I wouldn't say it matched invading a city but something with slime is something I could see. Also another small thing I would consider is between 1:30-2:00 there was a tiny little zap like sound. Kinda thought it distracted from the main sound that was presented, but that might just be personal preference. Regardless I enjoyed the listen and keep up the great work!
 

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Very well done, I enjoyed it. I wouldn't say it matched invading a city but something with slime is something I could see. Also another small thing I would consider is between 1:30-2:00 there was a tiny little zap like sound. Kinda thought it distracted from the main sound that was presented, but that might just be personal preference. Regardless I enjoyed the listen and keep up the great work!
Thanks a lot for your comments!
Yeah. When I said a city I think I imagined a certain style. I wasn't thinking huge, superhero-esque scenes, but more cartoony and game-like probably.

I can't really hear the sound you're referring to between 1:30 - 2:00 but we all pick up different things :)
 

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It reminds me of the night metro kingdom music from super Mario odyssey

 

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Hey folks. Me again <3

I thought I'd turn to you lovely people for feedback on something I recorded yesterday:


For this one, I vision some slime-like mob creatures taking over or invading a city, perhaps?
Any thoughts or feedback is much appreciated.

Twinight :)

Sounds good, and I also agree with Zoi. (for some odd reason it's giving me Danny Elfman vibes no clue.)
 
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twinightcreep0

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It reminds me of the night metro kingdom music from super Mario odyssey


Haha. Yeah, there are definitely some similarities here :)[DOUBLEPOST=1626830381][/DOUBLEPOST]
Sounds good, and I also agree with Zoi. (for some odd reason it's giving me Danny Elfman vibes no clue.)
Glad you like <3
I really like Danny Elfman's style. Have studied music from Batman Returns in the past.
 
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Hey folks. Me again <3

I thought I'd turn to you lovely people for feedback on something I recorded yesterday:


For this one, I vision some slime-like mob creatures taking over or invading a city, perhaps?
Any thoughts or feedback much appreicated.

Twinight :)


You killed this one chief, great job. It gives me those awesome gamer moments vibes. <3
 
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