First Attempt At A Montage (factions trapping)

[JH73]

I thought it looked a bit bland so left it unlisted for now; although it may be slightly off topic for these forums, mcm is one of the few mature/intelligent communities I know so if anyone would be able to give me any constructive criticism it would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.

 

[JH73]

The transitions seem off. Maybe what you could do is record yourself running down the exact path and do a bunch of transitions (not fading or anything, but with like a bass/drum beat for the song) of all of them, so it looks kinda the same but you can see all the different people, then for the beat drop, show you kicking their arse

Thanks good ideas, really appreciate it