First Trailer I made!! Feedback??

[vPixelZ]

Hey guys, so I've made my own trailer for my server and wanted some feedback on how it looks.

 

[vPixelZ]

Dont like the music juck.

Okay xD I took it because its easy to edit with lots of bass haha xD Thanks for your feedback though ;D

 

[Style]

The music ruins it, especially the vocals.

 

[Pow]

I'm pretty sure the music gave me aids

 

[vPixelZ]

Its a minecraft song XD[DOUBLEPOST=1440424452,1440424300][/DOUBLEPOST]Plus It's my first trailer lols.

 

[Hexcore]

Okay for your first time, though I thought you had more potential son, I thought I raised you right.

 

[thebaum64]

The music is bad, other than that it is pretty good

 

[TechBanana]

I dont like how you made the screen black so it can match the beat, it gets kind of annoying.
I'm OK with the music, other than the black screen it's pretty good

 

[vPixelZ]

I'll try to choose another song next time xD I find it pretty good idk, I like the bass lel

 

[Lethal]

I for one actually like the music. Gives it that unique non depressing music lol.

 

[Ajdin]

Yeah, the music makes it look terrible. Try getting a more dramatic/thriller-ish song.

Look into Hans Zimmer - Inception for example.

 

[vPixelZ]

Yea, Im currently working on a new trailer.
I'll be using

 

[Tom]

Its a minecraft song XD.

Ruined it

 

[Jasper]

I actually liked it, I think the song was ok but could of used another one. Other than that for your first time, It's really good.

 

[uglybutcher]

1st: Song, please change in the future
2nd: For the first ever trailer you have made. It was pretty good!
3rd: Take the advice from other trailers that have a lot of likes.
4th: You made me want to play. So,

 

[vPixelZ]

Some replies are kinda really rude ;-;

''This song gave me cancer''
''I now have ebola''

You guys have something else but definitly not cancer or ebola c: