Looking for Investor for a x,xxx monthly payout project

[Orbitt1]

I am looking for a investor for my Company, we produce video games on a already large platform (Not Minecraft)
We have a full 26 page google document explaining every aspect of the game and how it will work,
A full marketing and media stratergy written up and to be executed by a real world marketing specialist from a international company
A Skilled, Reputable and experinced development team which is prepaird to build the game
A LLC Company and entire legal side set up
And 2 Experinced and hard working owners

What Do You Get From This?
Providing the Investment ammount is what is needed we are prepaired to offer
A 25 percent Profit share of the First Game
A 15 percent Ownership share of the first game
Paid for Flights so that you can attend in person meetings
Various other small benefits

Requirements
All Applicants are required to sign a NDA (Non Disclosure Agreement)
Aged 17 or above (Would require parental signage on the NDA)
A full bank account (To recive your payments from the game, this is because your account will recive the 25 percent of the profit directly from the game)

Conclusion
This is a buisness plan that has been developed over the last year and a half. Because of the nature of the platform that the game will be published on with the correct marketing it has been calculated that we hit a profit of X,XXX a month within 3 weeks.
This will not be a hands on position if not wanted however we are open to your suggestions and ideas. Additionaly you will own a 15 percent of ownership for the First Game its self.

Contact
For any Applications, Questions or Feedback Please Contact Azzzzure On discord
Many thanks

 

[Matty]

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Typo fyi.

I'm trying my best to understand this post but it has a few inconsistencies. Firstly, you're advocating for a minimal investment (presumably, given the context, a low amount since your raw estimates of profit is the four figures over several months, which by no means qualifies as substantial) while simultaneously proposing paid-for flights? That seems like an incredible waste of starting capital. Secondly, what's the difference between ownership and profit share? Are these supposed to be common vs preferred shares, if so, who's going to be the accountant? Lastly, and most importantly, who calculated your predictions? Assuming it's an analyst, their credentials should be disclosed.

Just a few other nabs:

• To recive your payments from the game, this is because your account will recive the 25 percent of the profit directly from the game: Not quite, it'd have to legally first enter your LLC's bank account & then get sent out. You can't just send pure revenues of a game to a shareholder with the capital of the company.
• 2 Experinced and hard working owners - Playing the devils advocate & assuming this is true, what qualifies YOU to run the company?
• " by a real world marketing specialist from a international company" - Again, in high doubt, please provide the credentials of this person.
• "A LLC Company and entire legal side set up" - Entire legal side set up & yet have sent out a raw HR post which clearly is a first revision.

To anyone who may actually be looking to purchase equity from this 'company', please be careful.

 

[Platonicus]

"This is a buisness plan that has been developed over the last year and a half. Because of the nature of the platform that the game will be published on with the correct marketing it has been calculated that we hit a profit of X,XXX a month within 3 weeks."
xxxx a month within 3 weeks.

I believe putting the time into things that you want to work out is always good, which is not the thing with this post I believe. I hope your project succeeds, but to get serious investors, you need a serious project set up and also have a great understanding of things that you are saying as Matty said.
Anyways, gl

 

[Zach2002]

Typo fyi.

I'm trying my best to understand this post but it has a few inconsistencies. Firstly, you're advocating for a minimal investment (presumably, given the context, a low amount since your raw estimates of profit is the four figures over several months, which by no means qualifies as substantial) while simultaneously proposing paid-for flights? That seems like an incredible waste of starting capital. Secondly, what's the difference between ownership and profit share? Are these supposed to be common vs preferred shares, if so, who's going to be the accountant? Lastly, and most importantly, who calculated your predictions? Assuming it's an analyst, their credentials should be disclosed.

Just a few other nabs:

• To recive your payments from the game, this is because your account will recive the 25 percent of the profit directly from the game: Not quite, it'd have to legally first enter your LLC's bank account & then get sent out. You can't just send pure revenues of a game to a shareholder with the capital of the company.
• 2 Experinced and hard working owners - Playing the devils advocate & assuming this is true, what qualifies YOU to run the company?
• " by a real world marketing specialist from a international company" - Again, in high doubt, please provide the credentials of this person.
• "A LLC Company and entire legal side set up" - Entire legal side set up & yet have sent out a raw HR post which clearly is a first revision.

To anyone who may actually be looking to purchase equity from this 'company', please be careful.

Typo fyi,

recive is receive spelled correctly
Experinced is experienced spelled correctly

 

[Matty]

Typo fyi,

recive is receive spelled correctly
Experinced is experienced spelled correctly

Huh? They were copied & pasted directly smartass LOL

Post automatically merged: May 5, 2024

In response to this we are talking about the fact that 3 weeks after launch we are projected to start reaching X,XXX A month

Post automatically merged: May 5, 2024

This is almost entirely incorrect.
''To recive your payments from the game, this is because your account will recive the 25 percent of the profit directly from the game: Not quite, it'd have to legally first enter your LLC's bank account & then get sent out. You can't just send pure revenues of a game to a shareholder with the capital of the company.''
The platform on which the game is being produced allows multiple payout methods to be added and percentage cuts to be allocated to specific connected banking accounts.

''2 Experinced and hard working owners - Playing the devils advocate & assuming this is true, what qualifies YOU to run the company''
Personally I have a buisness diploma along side a grade 9/A* (From School) this along side a list of self owned and partnter owned companys throughout the years justify my belivef for officially qualifing me to run my new company

''by a real world marketing specialist from a international company" - Again, in high doubt, please provide the credentials of this person.''
If this is something that intrests you and something you would like to learn more about instead of publicly slandering a new start up mabie try adding the discord in the post and we would be more than happy to provide you with the credentials.

A LLC Company and entire legal side set up - Entire legal side set up & yet have sent out a raw HR post which clearly is a first revision.
Whilst you may belive it to be a first revison it is not. This post has been designed to appeal to the users of the general population of the Built By Bit fourms.

Instead Of Slandering a New Start Up Because You have certian belives (All of which could of been disproven from adding the discord in the post and asking) Id advise doing some research into us and our company.
Furthermore I belive that you should not be using you presence on built by bit to try and push down up and coming Business ventures and ideas
If you have any futher Questions, statements or constructive feedback please message me through built by bit or through the discord in the post

1) It doesn't matter what the game allows lol... if you use company capital to develop a game entirely, you're committing fraud by directly redirecting those shares to the shareholders without due course i.e., dividend payment.

2) Sure

3) Slandering? Please tell me what was false about what I said. If you use your main attraction point about having an international "marketing specialist" - then surely you'd factually promote that with reasonable evidence?

4) It is very very clearly a raw post. Illogical sentences, grammar mistakes, misspellings - absolutely no one would ever advise you to send it out.

"Instead Of Slandering a New Start Up" - Again, you're using the word slander far too lightly. I haven't made any direct statements that can't be evidenced by a single google search.

To sum it up; I tried to be somewhat nice about it, but this is clearly a post that has had little thought put into it. You're asking people to invest money, and couldn't even spend a few minutes checking spelling mistakes. Your business diploma should qualify you enough to know that "in-person" meetings aren't a benefit, nor should you be using company funds for an in-person meeting for a digital product, that's beyond stupid and irresponsible with your investor's funds.

Another FYI; I think you'd mean libel, not slander. Good work from your legal team.

As a final edit:

Furthermore I belive that you should not be using you presence on built by bit to try and push down up and coming Business ventures and ideas

I'm not trying to push you down, if you build out a successful game then best for you. But I also won't let you mislead potential investors with a post full of unresearched promises. Had you actually used some of that time from your year and a half to get a basic understanding of how an LLC functions, I maybe wouldn't have had a reason to come across so harshly?

But yes, as others have said, good luck but dwc to any investors.