Need Feedback Server Trailer

[Ergology]

Hey everyone, I was hoping I could get some feedback on the new server trailer I made. I'm trying to improve my editing skills and was curious what do you guys think?

 

[Ergology]

Awesome trailer, really liked the part when you PVPed the player. Honestly, I think this would look better in Shaders

Ok so I need some shaders to improve this! thanks so much for your feedback I was just unsure about shaders because I thought it would look to cheesy But I agree with u!