Need opinion on my latest video project

[EclipseCinematics]

Hi!

Leave me some constructive critique in the comments of this thread!

Link to my project:

 

[Orochimaru]

Video doesn't seem to be there

 

[EclipseCinematics]

Video doesn't seem to be there

Could you send a screenshot?

 

[Zigenzag]

Just says its unavaliable

 

[EclipseCinematics]

Just says its unavaliable

Video doesn't seem to be there

Making new thread with correct link

 

[MemoryFault]

Unbelievable.

 

[Zigenzag]

New thread link here: https://www.mc-market.org/threads/504891/ for those interested in participating

 

[AnarchyCraft]

Hi!

Leave me some constructive critique in the comments of this thread!

Link to my project:

The vid worked fine for me but great video, I didn't like where it counted up a year every tick from a clock. maybe every 5 seconds jump it a couple years instead?