Opinions on my Art?

[ZoeyPlayzMC]

Hi! I'm a digital artist! I'm just making this thread to know how much others would rate my work, and if I were good enough to start commissions on my twitter.

All I really want is just a rating, and some advice, if possible. (1/10) , thanks!

EDIT!: PLEASE no asking for free art. xD
Also, sry if the image size is wayy too big, lol

 

[tylerisjewish]

Thanks! Wait... a good, or a bad different? I need to know.. ;-;



Lol, DM me, maybe we can work something out? xD



Aaaahhh, I just need learning resources, tutorials do just fine, like Jazza's. xD

AHHHHHHHHH JAZZZ IS MY DADDDDD

 

[ZoeyPlayzMC]

I blend the lipstick color so it looks like lip gloss, and the white shadings help alot too!

 

[RavitsART]

Those eyelashes though xD id give it a 5/10 keep it up! the more you draw the better youll get

 

[ZoeyPlayzMC]

Those eyelashes though xD id give it a 5/10 keep it up! the more you draw the better youll get

Thanks! But.. any constructive criticism? xD

 

[RavitsART]

Thanks! But.. any constructive criticism? xD

(The thread said opinions but if c&c is what ya want);
- Use cleaner lineart (the first image looks like just sketch and then color under it xD)
- Study the planes of the face a little bit, from what im seeing you have very little rendering on the face just add some shadow on one side of it and thats it (the face isnt flat it has lots of stuff popping out of it ) This is something im currently trying to do myself lel
- Look into hair rendering/coloring tutorials and use some reference for hair, as is your hair looks pretty flat.
Thats all i got for you for now, work that out and youll up your stuff to a whole other lvl
p.s it is never too early to start making commissions, offer your work and im sure someone would be interested Hit me up on discord if you have anymore questions, i love helping out (even though i could use help myself hahaaa...)

 

[ZoeyPlayzMC]

(The thread said opinions but if c&c is what ya want);
- Use cleaner lineart (the first image looks like just sketch and then color under it xD)
- Study the planes of the face a little bit, from what im seeing you have very little rendering on the face just add some shadow on one side of it and thats it (the face isnt flat it has lots of stuff popping out of it ) This is something im currently trying to do myself lel
- Look into hair rendering/coloring tutorials and use some reference for hair, as is your hair looks pretty flat.
Thats all i got for you for now, work that out and youll up your stuff to a whole other lvl
p.s it is never too early to start making commissions, offer your work and im sure someone would be interested Hit me up on discord if you have anymore questions, i love helping out (even though i could use help myself hahaaa...)

Aw thanks! I'll definitely work on it, that's what I was looking for.
Oh, and okay, i'll try to open up commissions too. Btw, is twitter good for commissions?
Ty.[DOUBLEPOST=1509101530][/DOUBLEPOST]Oh, and also, the first one IS a sketch over color. xD

 

[xGarve]

They look dope! I would pay between 5 & 7.50 $ for it facepalm

 

[RavitsART]

Aw thanks! I'll definitely work on it, that's what I was looking for.
Oh, and okay, i'll try to open up commissions too. Btw, is twitter good for commissions?
Ty.[DOUBLEPOST=1509101530][/DOUBLEPOST]Oh, and also, the first one IS a sketch over color. xD

Hmm i havent used twitter for getting clients personally? ik its a thing that is done but i dont really know if its any good, but i would give it a try if you are interested, just use the right # i also know you can make a shop on deviantart, maybe you could try that as well best of luck!

 

[ewjwilson]

I love it! I think it's its 'own style' and seems unique to you. GLWS!

 

[painfulbunny]

Looks amazing. I've always wanted to get into digital art, just don't know where to start. I even have a Tablet and everything. Any tips? Programs, etc?

Thanks.

 

[RavitsART]

Looks amazing. I've always wanted to get into digital art, just don't know where to start. I even have a Tablet and everything. Any tips? Programs, etc?

Thanks.

Hmm, i would look into some basic digital art tutorials on youtube, but first choose what kind of stuff you want to make, there is a lot out there program wise, for painting photoshop and paintoolsai are the 2 most popular i think, and if you want to get into vector logos the illustrator is the thing for you. Hit me up on discord if you have any more questions.

 

[Mhtro]

You must learn to shade a bit better other than that nice work.

~Mhtro

 

[Kaners]

Ok first of all let me state I am bored and in school. So I have a lot of freetime.

Lets adress your lineart it seems jittery. I should say its not solid. When drawing digital art you should try to avoid going over your lines and go for strokes. If you add enough detail or make your brush smaller it can easily work.

Now for your overall drawings I say everyone can get better, I say your picture is lacking details in general it is basic but good obviously improving on techniques like the way the hair flows and such. To give you a rating I would say 6/10 its good but can be improved upon.

Now lets get into your colors. A lot of the colors seem to blend very well but the shading isnt very "good". I'd say improve on your shading some examples are making skin tones darker when the hair covers part of the face. Making some parts darker and lighter are really all it is, this could be very easy and a tip when you're shading use multiple colors and start with the light ones and add the darker ones like layers.

Now I dont want it to seem like I am butchering you so let me say what I like. I do like your signiture currently mine sucks lol. I also like the shading you did on the lips for the 2nd picture very well and I overlike it. You have a style which is evident and hard for many artist to built upon! I also liek the eyes of the fist two pictures and your choice of background!

Enjoy my feedback.

 

[ZoeyPlayzMC]

Looks amazing. I've always wanted to get into digital art, just don't know where to start. I even have a Tablet and everything. Any tips? Programs, etc?

Thanks.

Well, to start drawing, just draaaawwwwwww. xD
I'd love to tell you more, hit me up in the DMs.

 

[Tricky]

6.9/10

 

[ZoeyPlayzMC]

6.9/10

Oh, any feedback on how I could improve then?

 

[Tricky]

Oh, any feedback on how I could improve then?

it was a joke my real rating is 8.9/10