Please Rate Build

[Faith Pulles]

I am incredibly new to building, I have built small buildings here and there. Although this is the biggest thing I have built. Took me two days which is probably too long. I really don't think anyone would want to buy this, so I will be asking for some tips, criticism, or any feedback on this build to help me in the future. Do you think it took me too long? Do you think it is too white? Well please post. Also, this build is a spawn, it could be a very small Prison spawn with A,B,C, and D or a faction spawn or just any kind of spawn. I would really appreciate feedback on this build, I want to get better. So thank you for watching. Also the video has bad quality, very sorry.

 

[JugadorNinja]

To be your first spawn, it is decent for a small server. The bad thing is that is in a closed area, feels like if one were inside a box. Other then that looks neat, keep it going. About the colors, it is too white, make it more lively.

 

[Lethal]

BlakeTheBuilder , this is the type of thread you should be doing your opinions on, not posting it on builds that are being sold.

 

[Faith Pulles]

Thanks guys for the review. Also I apologize for choosing the wrong file to upload this thread on, I didn't see a better one at the time and just joined yesterday.

 

[Fl0w_SKIST]

I got stuck lesing to the song and felt a little awkward and didn't feel like looking at the video while listening to it.