Rate my video showing off my server I guess?

[Jaosn327]

Hi so I just recently made a video about my server which is nearly complete and wanted to know if it would attract players and if people would like the server.



EDIT: Third trailer is way better than this one, currently making a fourth since a day later I got advised to use more upbeat music and to make the beginning of trailer better.



EDIT : Made some edits

 

[Luke.]

7/10. Maybe use shaders for the fly by's?

 

[JustRayz]

nice so far, include

1. shaders
2. better music (maybe dramatic)
3. mods for the movement, it's done by keyboard since you bashed into something Very good for keyboard doe
4. date of release isn't necessary
5. pvp bit isn't necessary

Quite nice doe.

 

[Jaosn327]

Thanks guys, I got a mod for recording so that it's more smooth. I'm currently making another trailer which I hope will be better by using all of this advice you guys gave me I'll post the 2nd trailer here when I'm done. Really appreciate the advice that was given

 

[Jaosn327]

Hey guys so I took some advice and made the new trailer. Couldn't add shaders because of crash when recording and all of that and also removed date of release. I also improved movement as well. Increased fps as well which I guess is good.

 

[Jaosn327]

Alrighty so I decided to make a 3rd trailer which I have improved to make shorter and am currently working on a forth one after going to Spigot and being advised to make the intro faster paced and to use more upbeat music.

 

[theDigitalGhost]

• Music should be constant throughout the entire video.
• If you're advertising a PVP server, they want to see PVP (probably from a first player point of view), and what makes it different. Not some standardized diamond armor fights that's in every other trailer.
• Font used doesn't appeal to me, but that's just my opinion.
• A bit too short for my taste and doesn't provide me with enough information to persuade me to join. I need to see, without joining the server itself, why I should add it to my server list.

Awesome editing, though! I liked the sync

 

[Jaosn327]

• Music should be constant throughout the entire video.
• If you're advertising a PVP server, they want to see PVP (probably from a first player point of view), and what makes it different. Not some standardized diamond armor fights that's in every other trailer.
• Font used doesn't appeal to me, but that's just my opinion.
• A bit too short for my taste and doesn't provide me with enough information to persuade me to join. I need to see, without joining the server itself, why I should add it to my server list.

Awesome editing, though! I liked the sync

Currently learning new editing software that I got to improve editing, will also be adding a few more things to make the PvP stand out from regular servers along with a better font and constant music
EDIT: Don't know if it'll be done this week since I'm busy with school this week with projects, quizzes, and tests

 

[Jaosn327]

Its nice, But if you use shaders it would've made it a lot sexier.

can't use shaders though D:[DOUBLEPOST=1448486867,1448475455][/DOUBLEPOST]

 

[WRLD]

KitPVP or pvp servers aren't really popular anymore dude. If anyone wanted to pvp like this, they would goto Kohi.