Thoughts?

[Swift.]

Spoiler: Thread Design Color 1

Spoiler: Thread Design Color 2

Thread 1:  https://i.gyazo.com/c26cfc56c49f1a35f85bb356de7d34bb.png

Thread 2: https://i.gyazo.com/36fc6108e92b384fb989b56742c75dd9.png

Swift#1293


looking for graphic ppl to help me (paying)​

 

[DoveYT]

Thanks and ikr, all I asked for is help not for a trashed thread by new members who prob can’t even make graphics[DOUBLEPOST=1529324629][/DOUBLEPOST]


Love all the new members with 0-2 pos rep trashing my thread, all I asked for is help and what do I get? A trashed thread by people who prob can’t do graphics then self

lol wtf we gave a honest opinion, your graphics are total fucking shit, if you can't take critisism then get the fuck off of MCM.

 

[Rhythmn]

I dont really enjoy the purple bubbly text, but i do like the darker background and the purple pompoms. They could be a little smaller though, and the text could be larger and cleaner with some spacing.

 

[marvd0g]

In thread one, i feel like the font could be made more readable/ changed to something more appealing. Also the gradient on the weird gear shape is a bit odd looking.

Thread two has too many colors for my eyes and I would recommend sticking to no more than 3 colors that go with eachother.

 

[Drub.]

Not really my kind of style when it comes to thread designs.

 

[Ilay A]

Thanks and ikr, all I asked for is help not for a trashed thread by new members who prob can’t even make graphics[DOUBLEPOST=1529324629][/DOUBLEPOST]


Love all the new members with 0-2 pos rep trashing my thread, all I asked for is help and what do I get? A trashed thread by people who prob can’t do graphics then self

Bro please move this to feedback, trashing is allowed when taking feedback as long as it's not dis-respectful / racist

You might wanna close this for now

Have a good one

 

[StretchPvP]

Here are my critiques:

1 - Try to use gradients sparingly
2 - The font is too basic
3 - Don't use gradients with fonts
4 - The font is very basic and generic and also has too much letter spacing
5 - There are a few grammatical errors (Capitalization, abbreviation formats, etc.)
6 - Too much repetition with the shapes
7 - Too much empty space - it doesn't necessarily need more content, just more creativity
8 - Uneven spacing
9 - There isn't much color consistency & the colors don't flow well
10 - The contrast between the background color, the font color, and the text color sort of "strains" the eye
11 - It's not really eye catching or unique
12 - I would get/make a logo that really emphasizes branding

Hope these help!

 

[Swift.]

Thank you everyone for the feedback and help, all I wanted is to improve my graphics and not have any of this but, I thank for helping, if you have more feedback or wanna help me improve which I will pay for, please message me

 

[Swift.]

bro this shit is actually nice. color 1 is my fave, but i would say google things like "matte colors that look well together" and then you should get some colors that would look really clean

Thanks!