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Hey, Thanks for your suggestions! I have updated the thread and fixed what I could.Design looks great, however there are a few things you could improve on:
- I would recommend actually adding the experience you say you have.
- Also, there are a few grammatical errors dotted throughout the post, so I suggest fixing those too.
I wish you the best of luck with your management services
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Like I said I managed these servers a year or so ago and they died so I don't really remember them. And what grammar errors are there?Like Sosa said, I suggest adding your previous experiences on servers, also there are still a few grammatical errors.
Good luck!
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^ Should be don't
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^ Should be to not too
^ Should be don't
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^ Should be to not too
Thank you.
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Example of the 3 too/two/to
To - I am going to the shop
Too - I'm going too.
Two - Can the two of us go
I feel like this was needed, enjoy
Example of the 3 too/two/to
To - I am going to the shop
Too - I'm going too.
Two - Can the two of us go
I feel like this was needed, enjoy
I am pretty sure I understand grammar. No one is perfect. But thanks anywayhttps://gyazo.com/aa1e2c863a7cb4ebf9379d62b30eeebb
Example of the 3 too/two/to
To - I am going to the shop
Too - I'm going too.
Two - Can the two of us go
I feel like this was needed, enjoy
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