[$20] [FEEDBACK] Server trailer #??
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The start gave me hope but then it just went back to a generic trailer. The intro makes it look like a story and I would have developed onto that. Anywho, moving on.
0:12 to 0:22 for a Logo and "Presents" is a tad long?
The motion is too fast for some of the structure to be shown properly. These builds have more detail in them and you should then slow down a bit or every shot is a blur of slabs.
The same text background animation every shot.
I like the ending animation of the text ( the jumping )
Why is this shot so dark? The darkness does nothing but cover builds. They seem like shit though, so I understand.
Would still slow down the text appearing a bit.
Why?
I like the subtle change in the outro. But...
The rest looks fine but for the price, he can't complain. But still, stop taking on such shitty orders. Invest time into your craft so it rewards you later.
0:12 to 0:22 for a Logo and "Presents" is a tad long?
The motion is too fast for some of the structure to be shown properly. These builds have more detail in them and you should then slow down a bit or every shot is a blur of slabs.
The same text background animation every shot.
I like the ending animation of the text ( the jumping )
Why is this shot so dark? The darkness does nothing but cover builds. They seem like shit though, so I understand.
Would still slow down the text appearing a bit.
Why?
I like the subtle change in the outro. But...
The rest looks fine but for the price, he can't complain. But still, stop taking on such shitty orders. Invest time into your craft so it rewards you later.
The start gave me hope but then it just went back to a generic trailer. The intro makes it look like a story and I would have developed onto that. Anywho, moving on.
0:12 to 0:22 for a Logo and "Presents" is a tad long?
The motion is too fast for some of the structure to be shown properly. These builds have more detail in them and you should then slow down a bit or every shot is a blur of slabs.
The same text background animation every shot.
I like the ending animation of the text ( the jumping )
Why is this shot so dark? The darkness does nothing but cover builds. They seem like shit though, so I understand.
Would still slow down the text appearing a bit.
Why?
I like the subtle change in the outro. But...
The rest looks fine but for the price, he can't complain. But still, stop taking on such shitty orders. Invest time into your craft so it rewards you later.
Thanks, but yeah. Orders are orders, I usually have a line so I don't have much time with them. I take them because making trailers are a bit fun, and I can try new things on a small scale. Not to mention it's good side money. I'll likely not post in the feedback section until I have a pretty creative trailer. But once again, as usual, thanks for the feedback
I was just told to put those times by the clientReally nice trailer tbh, I would pay for one if I had the funds
One small mistake at the end about the release time, 4 PM EST = 9 PM GMT not 10 PM GMTbarely noticeable though, rly good trailer
, but thanks!Thanks so much for the feedback, appreciate it!
0:29 you didn't render at 2K like I told all of you in the group chat, so the shake made ugly blur curves, keep that in mind please.
Twitches looked quite off , make the "mountain" on the speed graph "taller"
Text should've been kept simple, I didn't like what you did with the text at 0:31, that attempt to make a glitch made it look off
0:37 couldn't understand a thing.
Ending screen berry saxy
overall a 7/10
Now give me actual feedback on my thread : https://www.mc-market.org/threads/440473/
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