2nd mascot attempt. feedback/criticism plz

[Ncsg]

First attempt : https://www.mc-market.org/threads/327196​

 

[FileLost]

Hey I see you’re starting mascots. A few things I’d say you can improve on. Firstly, the colouring is not precise, try and imagine a light source coming from a direction and get the feel of where you put your highlights/shadowing. Secondly, If you’re going to make mascot themed logos, make the lines so much thicker as of course that’s the style. Other than that, a good 2nd attempt.

 

[Grace.]

First attempt : https://www.mc-market.org/threads/327196​

Not that bad. The main issue I see here is the colouring tbh.

 

[Jairo Development]

I like it, good job. Practicing will always pay off!