A Partner (with funds) to help me make this server into reality

[Fury]

EzureMC
Upcoming Towny server
Here on EzureMC, we strive to produce outstanding
and unlike any other server’s gameplay for players.
We will be incorporating several features and aspects to the
server to make it the best it can be.

We are dedicated to provide players the opportunity to determine different ways to obtain the gold required in order to enhance their abilities and their town.

Little bit of information about the server:
The server includes custom crafting (In Progress)
custom generators (In Progress)
Custom Pets (With it's own role to play) (In Progress)
Custom town plugin (In Progress)
Custom Gold Currency/plugin

More information will be given when you join the discord!

Looking for:
Partner/Owner
Sponsors

Requirements:
- Able to put funds towards the server
- Age: 16+
- Experience in server management
- Confidence/Positive Attitude

- IP | In Progress
- Store | In progress
- Discord | https://discord.gg/EwuBaYK


Thank You
- Alpha​

 

[Ren]

Too vague and boring, at least make your post interesting to read through.

 

[Sol H]

EzureMC

Here on EzureMC, we strive to produce outstanding
and unlike any other server’s gameplay for players.
We will be incorporating several features and aspects to the
server to make it the best it can be.

We are dedicated to provide players the opportunity to determine different ways to obtain
the gold required in order to enhance their abilities and their town.
More information will be given when you join the discord!

Looking for:
Partner/Owner
Sponsors

Requirements:
- Able to put funds towards the server
- Age: 16+
- Experience in server management
- Confidence/Positive Attitude

- IP | In Progress
- Store | In progress
- Discord | https://discord.gg/EwuBaYK


Thank You
- Alpha​

Could you at least tell us what your server type is? ._. I don't wanna have to join the discord for that lol.

 

[Annie S.]

Here on EzureMC, we strive to produce outstanding
and unlike any other server’s gameplay for players.
We will be incorporating several features and aspects to the
server to make it the best it can be.

We are dedicated to provide players the opportunity to determine different ways to obtain the gold required in order to enhance their abilities and their town.

To be a little more constructive than the existing comments (which are all valid); this section here sounds like you googled "professional buzzwords" and crammed as many of them as possible into three sentences. It's great to use strong vocabulary, but not to the point where it distracts from the content of your sentences.

A few things you could include are screenshots of existing assets, more detail about your custom features (especially the gold stuff, which seems to be a focus), how much you're looking for from investors, why they should believe that Ezure will make enough revenue to pay them back, etc.