An opinion on this intro

[Ataku]

Yes this is without after affects, but just wanted an opinion

 

[Candy]

cool

 

[Eqs]

3/10

 

[Ataku]

3/10

any tips on how I should improve?

 

[vein]

I find that when the text comes in, it appears too quickly. Other than that, good job! B^)

 

[Ataku]

I find that when the text comes in, it appears too quickly. Other than that, good job! B^)

The head? Thanks btw!

 

[Ansett]

It isn't too bad. I would working on getting a background and font, then it should look a lot better.

 

[Ataku]

It isn't too bad. I would working on getting a background and font, then it should look a lot better.

okay. thanks for the info

 

[Ansett]

okay. thanks for the info

I recommend the font 'Biko' it's thin but looks nice.

 

[Ataku]

I recommend the font 'Biko' it's thin but looks nice.

ill try it out!