Any tips on my made trailer for my own server? I want to make it better!

[Thijs]

* Recorded in MineCraft Cinematic Mode
* Recorded with Fraps
* Edited with Sony Vegas Pro 13.0

My video, audio line:

Video:

Video doesnt work anymore plus we got a way better trailer already close this thread please.

 

[MantisDev]

You removed your vid?

 

[Adrenalize]

My tips and feedback- absolutely horrible! This is bad! You should pay me money to watch it!

Why?

Cause I can't watch it :3

 

[Thijs]

Woops!
Will close the thread, someone made us a trailer.