Art Feedback

[Kyle]

Leave me some feed back I think I just now am starting to get the hang of drawing keep in mind I've been doing this only about 2 weeks now

 

[Ireland]

Leave me some feed back I think I just now am starting to get the hang of drawing keep in mind I've been doing this only about 2 weeks now
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Woahh first official drawing? This is amazing. Expect me to buy something off of you soon

 

[Kyle]

Woahh first official drawing? This is amazing. Expect me to buy something off of you soon

Sure lets call this one my first official drawing

 

[Bailey]

Nice! I couldn't even draw a car .

 

[Marthellio]

Quite a bit you can improve on, the character is a bit wide, but the shading is decent.

 

[Deep]

I like the shining on the sword, but you should improve on hair,ears shading,size of the person ()

 

[n0tzach]

I like the shining on the sword, but you should improve on hair,ears shading,size of the person ()

so rud calling him fat

 

[PRECISIONPVP]

Looks awesome! Keep up the good work!

 

[vhckxgpzVK]

This is what I immediately noticed. The shine on the sword shouldn't be completely parallel. The shine should have an incline where the centerpiece extends to the edge/blade of the sword

Also, the handle of the sword doesn't seem lined up with the blade part.

The hair looks flat and his right arm is too low.

 

[thebaum64]

Quite a bit you can improve on, the character is a bit wide, but the shading is decent.

Agreed, hair needs some work as well, at the moment it looks like a wig no offence