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Website: http://mc-athera.com

Server, trailer, logo and website were made by me.

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Honestly, the idea behind the trailer is pretty bad, I feel like you could do far more, not to mention it's pretty lengthy, you should add better text, better transitions, work on those speed ramps (use AE time remapping is better) get better shaders and textures, work on the angles and overall, use the sync for your side, song suddenly gets confusing and tears up? why not to fit in a glitch effect. maybe some sound effects / GUI.

Go wild, it's your creation.
 

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Honestly, the idea behind the trailer is pretty bad, I feel like you could do far more, not to mention it's pretty lengthy, you should add better text, better transitions, work on those speed ramps (use AE time remapping is better) get better shaders and textures, work on the angles and overall, use the sync for your side, song suddenly gets confusing and tears up? why not to fit in a glitch effect. maybe some sound effects / GUI.

Go wild, it's your creation.

The idea of the trailer was not to show off my skills as editor but to show off the server in a fun manner that fits the theme, which I honestly believe I did successfully. Thanks for the feedback though!
 

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The idea of the trailer was not to show off my skills as editor but to show off the server in a fun manner that fits the theme, which I honestly believe I did successfully. Thanks for the feedback though!
I mean, that's what the feedback is for, to make you aim higher, I said the same but I took editing slightly more seriously xd , if you need help though I'm always here.
 

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It was somewhat bare but I do like the kinda tv angles in the camera if you get what I mean. I would say give us more info, and put your ideas in a more logical storyline type deal. But it was okay 5.5/10
 
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