Bedwars Youtube Video Feedback

[Monjii]

Hello guys,

I've just uploaded my very first video "bedwars but I collect enemy wool to defend the bed" - what do you guys think? what can I improve the next time I post a video?

Here's the link to the video.

 

[TheTrueNick]

Looks like a good video, the only thing I'd change is maybe shorten the title a bit, for example you could've called it "Rainbow Wool Challenge"