Build Cinematic

[DiabloTurtle]

Please let me know what you think of my most recent build
Recorded by 24553

 

[Aekalix]

What's up with the shake effect? Makes me dislike the whole trailer, sorry.

 

[DiabloTurtle]

What's up with the shake effect? Makes me dislike the whole trailer, sorry.

Yeah, wasn't my idea and it won't be happening again in future cinematics

 

[Jaii]

Look's like complete shit.

Jokes, love it man. Nice work!

 

[DiabloTurtle]

You selling it, or just built it for fun . Good luck if you are selling it, looks very nice!

Already sold it! If you're interested in another build I'm getting a cinematic of done, PM me haha

 

[SwiftBeatz]

You asked for feedback so here goes some. Don't get me wrong, this is a fantastic build. I purely offering constructive criticism to help improve. I wanted to stress this first as people on MCM seem to take offense very easily.

- Your trees look too spherical.
- I'm personally not a fan of using brick in an oriental theme either.
- I'd also say you went a little overkill with the slabs/stairs when layering the temples. In the future, you should either diversify or lower the clutter there. For instance, mix sandstone in with the birch or stick to only slabs & blocks, stairs are probably what makes it look messy.
- One more thing is that you could've done more under the temples.

Correct me if I'm wrong on some of this as it's difficult to tell much with the shaders. I never use shaders on my builds.

 

[DiabloTurtle]

You asked for feedback so here goes some. Don't get me wrong, this is a fantastic build. I purely offering constructive criticism to help improve. I wanted to stress this first as people on MCM seem to take offense very easily.

- Your trees look too spherical.
- I'm personally not a fan of using brick in an oriental theme either.
- I'd also say you went a little overkill with the slabs/stairs when layering the temples. In the future, you should either diversify or lower the clutter there. For instance, mix sandstone in with the birch or stick to only slabs & blocks, stairs are probably what makes it look messy.
- One more thing is that you could've done more under the temples.

Correct me if I'm wrong on some of this as it's difficult to tell much with the shaders. I never use shaders on my builds.

Thanks for the feedback
Yeah, trees are a bit whacky but I'm not the best at them haha
The brick was mostly used to contrast the "dark/evil" side of the build rather than the "light" side. We built the light side first, normally I wouldn't use brick in an oriental theme so I agree with you there
Yeah under the temples I didn't do much, that part was rushed and I had no ideas there
Thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it and I'll try to take some of those notes into consideration for future builds

 

[Christopher]

You asked for feedback so here goes some. Don't get me wrong, this is a fantastic build. I purely offering constructive criticism to help improve. I wanted to stress this first as people on MCM seem to take offense very easily.

- Your trees look too spherical.
- I'm personally not a fan of using brick in an oriental theme either.
- I'd also say you went a little overkill with the slabs/stairs when layering the temples. In the future, you should either diversify or lower the clutter there. For instance, mix sandstone in with the birch or stick to only slabs & blocks, stairs are probably what makes it look messy.
- One more thing is that you could've done more under the temples.

Correct me if I'm wrong on some of this as it's difficult to tell much with the shaders. I never use shaders on my builds.

Best review I've seen in a while.

 

[DiabloTurtle]

Ok IDK wtf these people are saying but I love the shaking effect + the build! THIS IS AMAMAMAZIIIINGG

Thank you!