Can I get your opinion?

[Randomizable]

I'm a new trailer maker and just wondering what tips etc mc market can give me for this. This is one of my free trailers i have done today!

 

[Randomizable]

Very short , not too many shots , you need more imagery and dope shots

Yeah I agree looking back at it thanks for the opinon

 

[hgbf]

The camera movement feels a bit off. I'd recommend making more clips instead of dragging out the ones you have. Other than that, looks great!

 

[JohnLee]

FOV too high, smooth lightning not enabled, camera movements are sideways?, low graphics settings for leaves, overcompressed, color grading is done badly, dynamic range is utterly horrific, I personally don't like the music choice that much, you didn't do anything on the beat drop, which felt artificial as the visuals aren't really synced up with the audio, would recommend 60fps for those camera movements, lighting is bad in general, I would recommend adding fake light sources in c4d or blender or whatever you use.

Rated "Looks Terrible"

 

[Linny]

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[Lag]

Not too bad, put FOV to 70 (normal). Also try to add a vignette to make it look nicer with the shaders. Use a song that isn't overused, but for a free server trailer, not bad at all.