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Eh.
I tried to be something, it succeeded but also failed.
1) Move text down the left bottom corner.
2) I'm still going to judge you for the text, it's terrible.
3) The atmosphere with music is pretty good. The shots are great and try to tell a story.
4) Everything is at night time. Yuk, it somewhat fits the trailer and on the other hand, I despise it.
5) The trailer doesn't fit a stupid faction server.
6) The red effect is cool but you should've made it more gradually. Not full 100% red at the first show when that music segment arrives.
Eh.
Friday, the fifteenth of February
Friday, 15 February
Friday, February 15th
I tried to be something, it succeeded but also failed.
1) Move text down the left bottom corner.
2) I'm still going to judge you for the text, it's terrible.
3) The atmosphere with music is pretty good. The shots are great and try to tell a story.
4) Everything is at night time. Yuk, it somewhat fits the trailer and on the other hand, I despise it.
5) The trailer doesn't fit a stupid faction server.
6) The red effect is cool but you should've made it more gradually. Not full 100% red at the first show when that music segment arrives.
Eh.
Friday, the fifteenth of February
Friday, 15 February
Friday, February 15th
I couldn't do anything about the text, animation or grammar , had to stick to what the client said sadly.Eh.
I tried to be something, it succeeded but also failed.
1) Move text down the left bottom corner.
2) I'm still going to judge you for the text, it's terrible.
3) The atmosphere with music is pretty good. The shots are great and try to tell a story.
4) Everything is at night time. Yuk, it somewhat fits the trailer and on the other hand, I despise it.
5) The trailer doesn't fit a stupid faction server.
6) The red effect is cool but you should've made it more gradually. Not full 100% red at the first show when that music segment arrives.
Eh.
Friday, the fifteenth of February
Friday, 15 February
Friday, February 15th
Dw
It's skyblock xd , not factions
I appreciate the feedback!
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Nice camera movemets and flow (if i remember correctly from your past posts you improved A LOT). For me the music is way too boring and because of that it doesnt convince me to join the server. In my opinion the trailer should hype players. Hope i helped you!
Keep up the good work
Keep up the good work
Yeah, wasn't too excited to work with this song eitherNice camera movemets and flow (if i remember correctly from your past posts you improved A LOT). For me the music is way too boring and because of that it doesnt convince me to join the server. In my opinion the trailer should hype players. Hope i helped you!
Keep up the good work
Yes I do, you can check my service thread
https://www.mc-market.org/threads/417985/[DOUBLEPOST=1550059737][/DOUBLEPOST]
I offered doing that, client refused saying that it should only show us the lobby
But I'll keep that tip in mind
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