Clothing Brand!

[Gronk]

Hello, my name is Gronk, me and my friends made a clothing brand that is called x13, we really need some feedback/buyers! We have some very slick hoodies and pillows, if you got any questions feel free to ask me

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[Polarrr]

Bit plain ngl

 

[Gronk]

I don't think you will get buyers this way..[DOUBLEPOST=1584121764][/DOUBLEPOST]What's your discord tho xD

ejuke#7365[DOUBLEPOST=1584122277][/DOUBLEPOST]

Bit plain ngl

Added something that is more unique check it out

 

[Kuzni]

http://prntscr.com/rfyb7g ??

 

[Gronk]

http://prntscr.com/rfyb7g ??

Uhm what?[DOUBLEPOST=1584124805][/DOUBLEPOST]How did you get that

http://prntscr.com/rfyb7g ??

 

[Remnicore]

Nothing really unique here. As a target audience member and possible customer, I’m immediately turned off by the Teespring shop. Shows me a lack of creativity and passion because anybody can slap a PNG on a blank and have a company print it on-demand.

 

[Gronk]

Nothing really unique here. As a target audience member and possible customer, I’m immediately turned off by the Teespring shop. Shows me a lack of creativity and passion because anybody can slap a PNG on a blank and have a company print it on-demand.

Uhm we made the designs
We worked 3 days to get the x13 logos done

 

[Remnicore]

Uhm we made the designs
We worked 3 days to get the x13 logos done

I didn’t say you didn’t create them. I’m saying by the layout and lack of creativity, it turns me away (as a potential customer). Successful startup brands put a lot more effort, such as Alex’s Stupid Shirts. I backed them when they started on Kickstarter and I love their brand.

 

[Gronk]

I didn’t say you didn’t create them. I’m saying by the layout and lack of creativity, it turns me away (as a potential customer). Successful startup brands put a lot more effort, such as Alex’s Stupid Shirts. I backed them when they started on Kickstarter and I love their brand.

I will make a shopify site very soon, but I need some buyers first, My whole family is going to buy something from the store to support our project, would this turn you on and potentially make you buy a hoodie or something?

 

[Alistair F.]

No unique concept whatsoever just seems like another clothing brand that just focuses on the brand and logo on the clothing, not a particularly unique or creative design concept. Good luck with sales.

 

[Ren]

I really suggest to get to the drawing board and mark out who your target audiences is. There are a bunch of possibilities that you could do to improve your brand however it seems like you guys just went and create the design then post it. At least put some efforts on your start-up business, get a proper business model then work from there. Use our feedback to propel you into rethinking the whole brand. Ask you and your friends these questions:

1. What is our goal for x13?
2. Who is our target audience?
3. Who are our competitors?
4. Based of the given feedback, how can we improve on our next release?

Like I said, plan everything out - don't rush too much for your startup business.[DOUBLEPOST=1584161552][/DOUBLEPOST]

I will make a shopify site very soon, but I need some buyers first, My whole family is going to buy something from the store to support our project, would this turn you on and potentially make you buy a hoodie or something?

You don't just point out things like this, ask yourself how can you let him buy your product.

 

[Gronk]

I really suggest to get to the drawing board and mark out who your target audiences is. There are a bunch of possibilities that you could do to improve your brand however it seems like you guys just went and create the design then post it. At least put some efforts on your start-up business, get a proper business model then work from there. Use our feedback to propel you into rethinking the whole brand. Ask you and your friends these questions:

1. What is our goal for x13?
2. Who is our target audience?
3. Who are our competitors?
4. Based of the given feedback, how can we improve on our next release?

Like I said, plan everything out - don't rush too much for your startup business.[DOUBLEPOST=1584161552][/DOUBLEPOST]

You don't just point out things like this, ask yourself how can you let him buy your product.

1. Our goal is not to make ANY profit our goal is to sell atleast ten items by the end of 2 months.
2. Kids - Teenagers
3. Like every other clothing brand
4. Use shopify not teespring.

 

[Ren]

1. Our goal is not to make ANY profit our goal is to sell atleast ten items by the end of 2 months.
2. Kids - Teenagers
3. Like every other clothing brand
4. Use shopify not teespring.

"Ask you and your friends these questions"

 

[Gronk]

"Ask you and your friends these questions"

Yeah, that was our answers

 

[Ren]

Yeah, that was our answers

You didn't have to share these answers to us, you and your mates should have a deep conversation about those questions.

 

[Gronk]

You didn't have to share these answers to us, you and your mates should have a deep conversation about those questions.

Okay! Thank you