Criticism, Made my first .gif!

[TBK]

Hello, today I started learning how to make .gifs this was the first one ive made!
Is it good for my first time or bad ?

Red Version

Blue Version

 

[TBK]

Much better than my first banners mate! Good job!

Looks really cool, just add more frames? Not sure what's it called, just make it less laggy.

Thanks

 

[frozenheat]

Looks nice but maybe make the banner a bit faster

 

[Christopher]

Very nice, and do change the FPS.

But I think my first gif is better.

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[TBK]

But I think my first gif is better.

Haha xD

 

[Xized]

Goodluck!

 

[TBK]

Newer GIF, Made the frames faster