CS:GO Edit (feedback needed)

[TheOPMinecrafter]

Working on a csgo edit , i wanna know what i can do to improve , this is all i done so far (ik its less)



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tell me what you think i should do , really need feedback

 

[Turtle]

Working on a csgo edit , i wanna know what i can do to improve , this is all i done so far (ik its less)



Video :


tell me what you think i should do , really need feedback

add colour correction

 

[TheOPMinecrafter]

add colour correction

ok ty i will try