Dropped another song; let me hear your thoughts <3

[Day]

Link explains itself;

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[Day]

I really like this, keep up the work. What are your general prices for your beats?

Thanks! I really appreciate your feedback;
If you're looking for a custom beat, you can get in touch with me for a quote;

full rights to my tracks can start at around $50. This includes the FLP file, (fully editable and changeable) along with the .mp3 and .wav rights; basically you are the new owner

 

[TheND]

It's not good, but it's also not the worst I've heard. You definitely need to work on mixing your tracks. Also add a kick, if you already have a kick then the kick is too soft or the mix is f'd up.
Add variety, usually you can go one octave higher in your hooks, and/or add some more elements but be sure to build it up properly. In your case you can't go an octave higher, mainly because you're already on a high octave and your bells just don't flow that well.

The melody is too random, and the bells don't help at all. Maybe the bells will work if the melody sounds more natural, but I personally don't recommend using bells as your lead, unless you're going for a darker vibe (you would need to change your chords or take it a lower octave though).

Also it sounds like you might be using low quality samples and/or poor export settings.

 

[Day]

It's not good, but it's also not the worst I've heard. You definitely need to work on mixing your tracks. Also add a kick, if you already have a kick then the kick is too soft or the mix is f'd up.
Add variety, usually you can go one octave higher in your hooks, and/or add some more elements but be sure to build it up properly. In your case you can't go an octave higher, mainly because you're already on a high octave and your bells just don't flow that well.

The melody is too random, and the bells don't help at all. Maybe the bells will work if the melody sounds more natural, but I personally don't recommend using bells as your lead, unless you're going for a darker vibe (you would need to change your chords or take it a lower octave though).

Also it sounds like you might be using low quality samples and/or poor export settings.

Appreciate this feedback; this was a track I put together in maybe a few hours; I realize there's much more I could have done.

 

[Trochek]

I really like this beat, however through the long pause, I definitely think you could input a bigger drop with suspense, just an idea/element