[FEEDBACK] Commentary Video

[moon10k]

Wanna know if the commentary is good, along with any other feedback on the video. Felt a little off when recording the audio, so just wanna know, thanks

 

[Zalbus]

These videos are always good, I don't play Valorant myself, but I always like these videos. Good work!

 

[moon10k]

These videos are always good, I don't play Valorant myself, but I always like these videos. Good work!

Thanks so much! Yeah I don't play the game much at all either, but I enjoy putting together the videos about the game

 

[XER0GRAVITY]

Your video is great. The script is simple and straight to the point, and your editing is smooth and polished. The only thing I have to criticize would be your commentary, but even that is not bad.

 

[Collision]

Only thing I would say is try to make longer videos

 

[moon10k]

Your video is great. The script is simple and straight to the point, and your editing is smooth and polished. The only thing I have to criticize would be your commentary, but even that is not bad.

Appreciate it! And honestly, the commentary this time around was a little dull to be fair, I kind of noticed it when editing. But, fixed that up in my more recent videos!

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Only thing I would say is try to make longer videos

That's the plan! However, there just doesn't tend to be a lot to talk about with the topics I cover, since they are usually like, things without too much public info, so the video tends to be a bit short

 

[KadeMC]

Video was good. I will say one of the negatives for me was the abrupt ending. It sorta just cut off after saying feel free to comment below. Other than that, the editing was good, the commentary was solid. The script was not bad.

 

[moon10k]

Video was good. I will say one of the negatives for me was the abrupt ending. It sorta just cut off after saying feel free to comment below. Other than that, the editing was good, the commentary was solid. The script was not bad.

Appreciate it, and yeah im not very good at endings. I feel like it's common for people to be like "drop a like and subscribe" or whatever at the end of their videos, but I don't really wanna do that so it just makes the ending feel a bit more abrupt.