[FEEDBACK] Feedback on new mc vid
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Things I like: I think that you are good at editing, I genuinely do believe it. There was a couple of very good moments where I legit laughed. The Nani meme moment I love.
I also think that your voice is clear and it’s rare that your audio over-lapses, which is good.
Things to I think you should improve: You make many zooms, and sometimes it doesn’t really make sense to me why. Example: You zoom the chickens coming out of a lucky block but no comments on anything, I don’t really see the context behind that because I didn’t find that funny or found a reason it could be fun.
I suggest making perhaps less zooms and do more reactions and just talking, listening about what you were gonna with that server of yours for example would be more interesting than seeing 15 chickens popping out of a block for no reason.
Also another thing is the sneak peak of the video in the start, it didn’t really hook me. If I didn’t have the intention of giving feedback to you I probably would have left the video as a casual viewer on YouTube. The first seconds in your video is always very important this is where you hook people. I suggest making a permanent intro kind of what maybe Jacksepticeye where he always shouts top of the morning ya ladies! Something like that would definitely hook me more than that sneak peak.
I also think that your voice is clear and it’s rare that your audio over-lapses, which is good.
Things to I think you should improve: You make many zooms, and sometimes it doesn’t really make sense to me why. Example: You zoom the chickens coming out of a lucky block but no comments on anything, I don’t really see the context behind that because I didn’t find that funny or found a reason it could be fun.
I suggest making perhaps less zooms and do more reactions and just talking, listening about what you were gonna with that server of yours for example would be more interesting than seeing 15 chickens popping out of a block for no reason.
Also another thing is the sneak peak of the video in the start, it didn’t really hook me. If I didn’t have the intention of giving feedback to you I probably would have left the video as a casual viewer on YouTube. The first seconds in your video is always very important this is where you hook people. I suggest making a permanent intro kind of what maybe Jacksepticeye where he always shouts top of the morning ya ladies! Something like that would definitely hook me more than that sneak peak.
Thanks so much! I honestly really appreciate this kind of feedback. I do admit, I did do a lot of zooms in that video lol. I'll consider your advice for the intro/sneak peak part of video. I do have some reactions here and there, but I'm honestly unsure if I should include them, or if the video should be long or short. I mainly just keep it short and cut out some reactions/talking because I don't know if it'd get boring for the viewer as the video went on. However, Thanks again!
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