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Hey, this is my first ever banner. Could you leave some feedback and tips please.

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Looks pretty clean imo other than the fact the style is a bit outdated. Colour scheme actually fits well from my perspective with the sword giving some contrast. I would recommend a better font and the render looks a bit weird.

Good start other than that.
 

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Not bad the glow thing which is in his hand which u probs got from shadow 10k pack is a bit too bright and ruins the effect either if ur using color dodge on it turn the opacity down or use linear dodge.
Also add some color corrections and some effects like a bit of contrast on the character to make it look lively

Overall the rendering and the extruding is nice
 

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Do what CaddyBou said and on top of that,
Use a better font and do a better text overall.
If you don't have a rig which has a mouth get a better graphics pack with mouths. The mouth you put on this doesn't really go.
 
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