[FEEDBACK] First Song in Public! Advice?

[TylerHigbeer]

Hey guys,

So I had a summer camp where I would get a few lessons and sing a song in front of over 100 people. I know it wasn't perfect since it was more of a chill thing, but I would appreciate any feedback!

This is my first ever song in front of really anyone, so please give me honest feedback! Any random comments I will report, I would like honest feedback. Also give me good reasons why I suck if you think it was bad. Thanks c:

Don't judge face btw lol


Thanks a lot,
Viperfish

 

[TylerHigbeer]

Reserved

 

[Lavar]

Not bad for first time in front of a crowd but some good tips would be to move around, like arm movement, but pretty good besides that bro!

 

[TylerHigbeer]

Not bad for first time in front of a crowd but some good tips would be to move around, like arm movement, but pretty good besides that bro!

I was really nervous so I didn't perform as well as I would of liked to. Thanks bro!

 

[skunkdonkey]

In some areas, like at the start, seems to me if you are singing a bit fast (May be because of nerves). Apart from that, sounding good for your first time

 

[TylerHigbeer]

In some areas, like at the start, seems to me if you are singing a bit fast (May be because of nerves). Apart from that, sounding good for your first time

Thanks man! Yes I was nervous (obviously) since it was my first time, and I did go off tempo a few times, at the 2nd verse and 1st verse beginnings.

 

[TylerHigbeer]

Are you going to make your own song soon?

Yes, I actually was writing a song and finished the lyrics, but I want something more catchy, what I wrote was more of a life story type thing that doesn't have a great rhythm nor is it catchy.

 

[PruneGaming]

Not too shabby my guy! Too bad the camera quality was that good :/ Though, the guitar was very heavy and sometimes louder then your vocals... But other then that, move around, dance and what not, get the audience going. Though, very impressed! Can I sign you onto my record label?

 

[TylerHigbeer]

Not too shabby my guy! Too bad the camera quality was that good :/ Though, the guitar was very heavy and sometimes louder then your vocals... But other then that, move around, dance and what not, get the audience going. Though, very impressed! Can I sign you onto my record label?

PM me on discord - Viperfish#6549

 

[TylerHigbeer]

The guitar needs to be more quiet so we can hear you, make sure to warm up your vocal cords. Be more confident and move around. Be more hype

I completely agree. Since it was my first time, I do get that improvements have to be made and simple stuff like that has to be worked on. Thanks man!

 

[wendyOW]

yikes

 

[Grady]

Good sounding tenor

 

[TylerHigbeer]

pretty good, but you did have a voice crack here or there lol.
you can fix this by warming up or drinking warmer water

Thanks!

Good sounding tenor

I am a tenor (2)

 

[Ted]

It's a good song. Really emotional.

Edit: Don't worry, I feel you though. Last year I had to get up in front of my entire school and beatbox.

 

[itslyn]

Bad choice of song for your first time, but you managed well! Your voice is very pretty!