(feedback) first thread design

[moon10k]

Would love some feedback/pricing on my first thread design. Made it in AE cuz im dumb to use photoshop or shit. ty ty

 

[Alexx]

damn, for your first go this is fricken amazing. Just IMO, you do have a little background in the beginning maybe put hints of a faded background in the rest of the thread somewhere to bring it all around

 

[PradyXT]

Packages are a bit small/harder to read, otherwise great :tup:

 

[moon10k]

Packages are a bit small/harder to read, otherwise great :tup:

Alright, thanks![DOUBLEPOST=1589174514][/DOUBLEPOST]

You must have watched a lot of YouTube videos if this is your first thread design or practiced a lot before making thread designs for people.
Great thread design!

i did motion design in the past so maybe that helped [DOUBLEPOST=1589174533][/DOUBLEPOST]

damn, for your first go this is fricken amazing. Just IMO, you do have a little background in the beginning maybe put hints of a faded background in the rest of the thread somewhere to bring it all around

alright, got it!

 

[moon10k]

It looks incredible for the first thread design IMO. I could never do anything like that, especially for the first try.

Lots of other things ive tried play into designing apparently, you'll get there

 

[Safdar]

looks sicc

 

[moon10k]

looks sicc

thankssss

 

[RyzeAlchemist]

Looks very clean. Nice job dude!

 

[moon10k]

Looks very clean. Nice job dude!

 

[Tucker]

 

[moon10k]

y e s

 

[Brandon]

This looks really really good, especially for your first shot!
Consider me impressed.

 

[Patrick]

For your first thread design, it looks fantastic. Keep up the great work!

 

[babaooo]

Would love some feedback/pricing on my first thread design. Made it in AE cuz im dumb to use photoshop or shit. ty ty
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lol pm me to look at my first thread design, it looks like someone threw up on a long sheet of paper. this is insane level for first try.
btw when you said you made it in 'ae' WHAT IS THAT i need to know so i can be like u

 

[moon10k]

Slick, as you progress you can improve on the defects :tup:

This looks really really good, especially for your first shot!
Consider me impressed.

For your first thread design, it looks fantastic. Keep up the great work!

Appreciate all the positive responses!!!

lol pm me to look at my first thread design, it looks like someone threw up on a long sheet of paper. this is insane level for first try.
btw when you said you made it in 'ae' WHAT IS THAT i need to know so i can be like u

Made it in after effects because i cant be bothered to learn photoshop properly atm xd. It's not too difficult i dont think, easier for me anyways as I'm used to the workflow