Feedback For Sketch

[QuinnW]

I would like some feedback on a sketch I made a few days ago. Please don't say that it needs color as it's a sketch and I plan on learning to clean it up and color later on after I get a bit of practice.
Thanks in advance! Note: Please leave constructive criticism
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[Shroomy]

Tbh, I don't have feedback. It looks really since! But yeah, keep practicing etc.

 

[Llama]

I would work on your eyes. It doesn't look very good honestly, just keep practicing and maybe find another program than MS Paint.

 

[YourPanda]

Ok..... Um.... Did you do this with a mouse? If So... hands down... This is my work with a mouse - https://gyazo.com/0f455cb8efed11b1a167a45d4d718831

 

[QuinnW]

Ok..... Um.... Did you do this with a mouse? If So... hands down... This is my work with a mouse - https://gyazo.com/0f455cb8efed11b1a167a45d4d718831

Yes I did do this with a mouse xd. If you're having trouble using a mouse, I suggest using a program called Lazy Nezumi Pro as it makes you're mouse movements a bit more smooth.[DOUBLEPOST=1467861052][/DOUBLEPOST]

I would work on your eyes. It doesn't look very good honestly, just keep practicing and maybe find another program than MS Paint.

Thanks for the feedback, I might try and work with Adobe Illustrator from now on.

 

[YourPanda]

Yes I did do this with a mouse xd. If you're having trouble using a mouse, I suggest using a program called Lazy Nezumi Pro as it makes you're mouse movements a bit more smooth.[DOUBLEPOST=1467861052][/DOUBLEPOST]
Thanks for the feedback, I might try and work with Adobe Illustrator from now on.

I am not artist, I just made that to be funny, but seriously... That is my best drawing yet, what can I sell it for? I was thinking like 1-5 million?

 

[QuinnW]

I am not artist, I just made that to be funny, but seriously... That is my best drawing yet, what can I sell it for? I was thinking like 1-5 million?

I was thinking in the billions range...

 

[YourPanda]

I was thinking in the billions range...

Even better! I think you can sell your work for around 1-5$, and I am clearly the better artist

 

[QuinnW]

xd, I dream that one day I will achieve the level of grandeur that you're artwork has already achieved.

 

[YourPanda]

xd, I dream that one day I will achieve the level of grandeur that you're artwork has already achieved.

Thanks for that fantastic complement! And, thank you for amazing me with such a large word, that I can now add to my vocabulary list, I currently know the following words:

• Me
• MySelf
• I
• Am
• Sexy
• As
• Can
  
• Be
• And
• I
• Is
• A
• Artist
• Granduer

That is the list of works I know. MEH SOH SPECEL!

 

[Shroomy]

I tried using Lazy Nezumi but it doesn't work for Paint? It only worked for Photoshop.

 

[RavitsART]

Avoid too much cymetry in your work, makes it look unrealistic, try to get a better drawing software, i would suggest PainToolSai, looks like it would fit your style, also the neck looks a bit too long i think, if you think about it there still some hiding behind the chin so yeah thats a pretty long neck xD

 

[QuinnW]

I tried using Lazy Nezumi but it doesn't work for Paint? It only worked for Photoshop.

To use Lazy Nezumi Pro you must use the "Hook Window" feature before sing it to make smooth lines.

Avoid too much cymetry in your work, makes it look unrealistic, try to get a better drawing software, i would suggest PainToolSai, looks like it would fit your style, also the neck looks a bit too long i think, if you think about it there still some hiding behind the chin so yeah that's a pretty long neck xD

Thanks for the feedback and suggestion for software. I'll definitely check it out.

 

[QuinnW]

Whatever you do, if you're going to be drawing anime, I highly recommend not to use the line tool, MS Paint, Adobe Illustrator, or Photoshop, even if you do choose to use the line tool. I'll include some good alternatives at the bottom of this reply.

Your proportions are out of shape. If you're going to be drawing anime (second time I've said that), then you should use reference or watch a tutorial. The eyes are too close together, and the hair is choppy. The head is also slightly mis-shaped, but I guess that's fine.

Overall, you can definitely get better and probably one day become a professional manga illustrator.

GOOD Alternative Programs:

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• Manga Studio 5 (I don't know if 6 is out or not)
• Paint Tool SAI
• Krita (Free)
• FireAlpaca (Free, but the update notices are in Japanese)

Thanks for the software suggestions and tips. I'll make sure to try out those drawing programs asap.

 

[SandyBlox]

Wow, I did not know it was possible to draw good things on ms paint. Keep it up!