FeedBack Minecraft Server Trailer

[KnightMatte]

I finished a training video , and i would like the FeedBack , and how much would you pay for it

 

[Ilay A]

I finished a training video , and i would like the FeedBack , and how much would you pay for it

0:20 dang that was a longgggggg screen, the time ramps looks so awkward and out of place, send me a screenshot of the graph in the form "Value graph" , I don't like the fact you added a lot of beats and made the clips awkwardly long, you could fit 2x more clips in that time.

if you fixed most of the things I found awkward I'd pay 20$ ,but rn like 10-15

 

[KnightMatte]

Thanks for the FeedBack this is the Value Graph :

 

[Ilay A]

Thanks for the FeedBack this is the Value Graph :

you made the graphs in the wrong shape, no wonder it looked weird to me, they should look like this :
(obviously tweak it a little so it looks good)

^ That's only 1 ramp but you get the idea of how they should look like, and if you want another ramp just do this :

also here's a great tutorial, one of the first ones I watched when I opened Adobe AE, really gave me a strong push.

 

[KnightMatte]

thanks for the help , i do the graph value this way ,because i was inspired in the kelvin , in his last video , and I wanted to make a video similar to his , two more question , the color correction is good or i can improve ? and the shakes looks good ?

 

[NovaLegion]

Looks pretty good. Try the graph the dude gave you and link it.

 

[KnightMatte]

I did it the way he says it, and it really got better , thanks, i will render the video , and post here the link .[DOUBLEPOST=1567536911][/DOUBLEPOST]

 

[Ilay A]

I did it the way he says it, and it really got better , thanks, i will render the video , and post here the link .[DOUBLEPOST=1567536911][/DOUBLEPOST]

Nice, looks way better, decrease the FOV a little and try to get more interesting shots

 

[KnightMatte]

Ilay A Thanks for the help , you help me alot .