[FEEDBACK] My 1st Server Trailer

[moon10k]

Didn't charge anything for this trailer, because it was my first so I didn't wanna charge for a shit trailer. I know I need to make the ending longer (that was a rendering error) and I know I need to improve my time remap. A 1-10 would be nice though.

 

[Fanta]

Nice work! I'd say an 8/10

 

[Stress]

i like this, may not be the best i've ever seen but def very good and you can tell effort was put in

 

[moon10k]

i like this, may not be the best i've ever seen but def very good and you can tell effort was put in

Nice work! I'd say an 8/10

Thanks for the feedback!

 

[Fanta]

Thanks for the feedback!

Sure thing

 

[Jami]

Your editing is overall good but you should improve your cinematics. You should vary in the ways you move while filming more.
Other than that this trailer is really good especially for your first one!
7/10

EDIT: Also if you aren't using replay mod, you should download it.

 

[ignition]

pointers:

• use a lower fov
• sync music
• shorter cines
• time remap needs to be a curve:

1. which goes somewhat flat in the middle
2. which is somewhat curved at the ends

(for the generic style)^

• lower s_shake so as not to induce nausea
• better rp
• better shaders

good job though

 

[moon10k]

pointers:

• use a lower fov
• sync music
• shorter cines
• time remap needs to be a curve:

1. which goes somewhat flat in the middle
2. which is somewhat curved at the ends

(for the generic style)^

• lower s_shake so as not to induce nausea
• better rp
• better shaders

good job though

Can you suggest any good shaders?

 

[ignition]

Can you suggest any good shaders?

SEUS, Chocapic, Sildur's.

 

[Jami]

SEUS, Chocapic, Sildur's.

SEUS are probably the best shaders but you need to have a good computer to run them while recording.

 

[ignition]

SEUS are probably the best shaders but you need to have a good computer to run them while recording.

Yep!

 

[Ilay A]

Didn't charge anything for this trailer, because it was my first so I didn't wanna charge for a shit trailer. I know I need to make the ending longer (that was a rendering error) and I know I need to improve my time remap. A 1-10 would be nice though.

I'll rate this one a 3.5/10 , use RSMB[After effects plugin that you can crack], make the shots shorter, edit with music that inspires you, use time remapping as shown here :
Also, go wild with your trailers, do not imitate others or make anything boring, the limit is the sky

By the way, why is the text shaking? it's supposed to be in a whole other layer.