[FEEDBACK] My 1st Server Trailer

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Didn't charge anything for this trailer, because it was my first so I didn't wanna charge for a shit trailer. I know I need to make the ending longer (that was a rendering error) and I know I need to improve my time remap. A 1-10 would be nice though.

 
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i like this, may not be the best i've ever seen but def very good and you can tell effort was put in
 

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Your editing is overall good but you should improve your cinematics. You should vary in the ways you move while filming more.
Other than that this trailer is really good especially for your first one!
7/10

EDIT: Also if you aren't using replay mod, you should download it.
 

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pointers:
  • use a lower fov
  • sync music
  • shorter cines
  • time remap needs to be a curve:
  1. which goes somewhat flat in the middle
  2. which is somewhat curved at the ends
(for the generic style)^
  • lower s_shake so as not to induce nausea
  • better rp
  • better shaders
good job though
 

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pointers:
  • use a lower fov
  • sync music
  • shorter cines
  • time remap needs to be a curve:
  1. which goes somewhat flat in the middle
  2. which is somewhat curved at the ends
(for the generic style)^
  • lower s_shake so as not to induce nausea
  • better rp
  • better shaders
good job though
Can you suggest any good shaders?
 

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Didn't charge anything for this trailer, because it was my first so I didn't wanna charge for a shit trailer. I know I need to make the ending longer (that was a rendering error) and I know I need to improve my time remap. A 1-10 would be nice though.


I'll rate this one a 3.5/10 , use RSMB[After effects plugin that you can crack], make the shots shorter, edit with music that inspires you, use time remapping as shown here :
Also, go wild with your trailers, do not imitate others or make anything boring, the limit is the sky :p

By the way, why is the text shaking? it's supposed to be in a whole other layer.
 
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