Feedback on a few graphics I've created

[jxhdvn]

First is a template fortnite youtube banner which I plan to released in Resources as either free or 0.50

Spoiler: Fortnite Banner Template

Next is a server icon for my server, Mystic Zone

Spoiler: Mystic Zone Icon

Third is my MacBook Air desktop background that I'm currently using.

Spoiler: Desktop Background

 

[TemplarCraft]

Nice job looks good! you got potential keep practicing

 

[Zeiyon]

This you?
https://www.mc-market.org/threads/277098/




No, but it looks quite good. I would say maybe add some text background behind the slogan, since it's not easy to read.
Other than that looks quite good.

 

[jxhdvn]

This you?
https://www.mc-market.org/threads/277098/




No, but it looks quite good. I would say maybe add some text background behind the slogan, since it's not easy to read.
Other than that looks quite good.

Thanks for the tip, will do

Nice job looks good! you got potential keep practicing

Thank you

 

[Zeiyon]

Thanks for the tip, will do

Thank you

First time?

 

[jxhdvn]

First time?

As in making a banner, doing graphics, ??

 

[Zeiyon]

As in making a banner, doing graphics, ??

Graphics.

 

[jxhdvn]

Graphics.

Was introduced to photoshop when I joined the site, been doing ever since.
Never really been actually trying to do them until the last 5-6 months[DOUBLEPOST=1524010381][/DOUBLEPOST]

 

[AdamEdits]

good job me!

 

[Cal]

Definitely needs practice, though for a start, it's most certainly not too shabby.

 

[reachforheaven]

IMO what you may be doing is that thing that people new to Photoshop do which is adding too many blending options. Pretty much the number one way to make your stuff look amateur on a forum of graphic design is either using too many emboss (which I was guilty of when I started) or glows/stroke/shadow. Specifically for logos (but could also be applied to the wallpaper), you should aim to make the shape and colour palette unique rather than focusing too much on those effects. Again, though, pretty much everyone does this when they start so don't worry about it too much.

I like the banner though, the image is clean and has a fitting font. Never played the game before, but just by glancing at it I know what it's about.

 

[Tyler4Sale]

I really like the part of the Fortnite banner that isn't blurry. I think the blurred part should either take up less room or just not be as blurry.

The server logo's nice. Simple, but could possibly stand to be a little sharper. It looks like an M stacked on top of an M, not sure if that was the intention. The server's name doesn't have two words starting with M so it might potentially seem odd, but not that big of a deal. xD

The macbook background is nice too, albeit too blurry imo, but that's just my tastes.

Good job on the graphics. What program you use?

 

[jxhdvn]

IMO what you may be doing is that thing that people new to Photoshop do which is adding too many blending options. Pretty much the number one way to make your stuff look amateur on a forum of graphic design is either using too many emboss (which I was guilty of when I started) or glows/stroke/shadow. Specifically for logos (but could also be applied to the wallpaper), you should aim to make the shape and colour palette unique rather than focusing too much on those effects. Again, though, pretty much everyone does this when they start so don't worry about it too much.

I like the banner though, the image is clean and has a fitting font. Never played the game before, but just by glancing at it I know what it's about.

Thanks for the tips

I really like the part of the Fortnite banner that isn't blurry. I think the blurred part should either take up less room or just not be as blurry.

The server logo's nice. Simple, but could possibly stand to be a little sharper. It looks like an M stacked on top of an M, not sure if that was the intention. The server's name doesn't have two words starting with M so it might potentially seem odd, but not that big of a deal. xD

The macbook background is nice too, albeit too blurry imo, but that's just my tastes.

Good job on the graphics. What program you use?

Photoshop, I'll take the tips. I'll make the background less blurrier. The intention was to make it seem kinda 3D

Suggest reducing the blur on the fortnite banner , and making it a motion blur rather than glaurassian

Thanks, will do[DOUBLEPOST=1524407835][/DOUBLEPOST]Also made a new background for my Windows PC, do you think the clean look I went for worked

 

[jxhdvn]

Here Is Some Pngs You could use for ur fortnite art make sure to add outro pink glow so it looks more nicer and use a FX Pack

Spoiler: PNGS

Any suggestions for gfx packs?

 

[jxhdvn]

Any feedback on this

 

[kodo]

The color scheme is weird, try some material colors. also, the satin looks weird as well.