Feedback on a server trailer
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the shakes (or twitch its hard to tell) feels really violent and not smooth at all, if it is s_shake turn down the freq a lot and smoothen out the amp keyframes. something about the text feels bland and its also quite blurry, hurts my eyes a bit. flow could definitely be improved, maybe make the pacing a little faster if youre using a song like this.
Yep, I think the shakes are too violent as well. Text does look blurry (look @ this thread https://www.mc-market.org/threads/505002/). Thanks for the feedback!
The text would look even better if it was on the screen when doing the moving around bit but if you don’t want to change it , make the text bit shorter. Maybe get a better song because these songs are just so over used and aren’t even go imop.
I just have a few suggestions that I think would help the trailer.
1) Where it shows "EpictionPvP" at 0:07, you should replace the text with the logo for the server.
2) I feel like the info about the server is a little too spread out, making the trailer last longer than it should. No point in having a long trailer if people stop watching it midway through. Instead of 4 features showing up on one page, make them separate.
3) I hear this song a lot in trailers, nothing wrong with the song but it's just repetitive.
4) At 0:23, you should have each of those separately and show off the builds for each of them in between.
5) Similar to my first suggestion, the logo should also be shown at the end.
(If there's no logo then just ignore 1 and 5.)
1) Where it shows "EpictionPvP" at 0:07, you should replace the text with the logo for the server.
2) I feel like the info about the server is a little too spread out, making the trailer last longer than it should. No point in having a long trailer if people stop watching it midway through. Instead of 4 features showing up on one page, make them separate.
3) I hear this song a lot in trailers, nothing wrong with the song but it's just repetitive.
4) At 0:23, you should have each of those separately and show off the builds for each of them in between.
5) Similar to my first suggestion, the logo should also be shown at the end.
(If there's no logo then just ignore 1 and 5.)
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