Feedback on Designs

[Tide Graphics]

Looking for some feedback on these thread design I made quite a while ago, haven't made one since due to having heavy work load :0, and users backing out on commissions I might sell a few of my templates that I made if people want.

Commission for a users, school history project.

Something I made in my spare time.

 

[DanDoesMinecraft]

Looks clean mate. Real good job based on the concept.

 

[Tide Graphics]

The first one could use some improvement, whereas, the second one is a lot better.

The first one was a template for a cilents history project and he requested it to be clean and simple, while the second is a thread design unlike the first , thanks for the opinion though