Feedback on first rap?

[sugma]

feedback please? All criticism is fine no matter good or bad need to know.

 

[Orochimaru]

A rap not about sex, drugs, and money? That's a first. I like it

 

[blob]

feedback please? All criticism is fine no matter good or bad need to know.

sounds good but flow is..

 

[Ted]

Some things could need some help, but I like it a lot

 

[sugma]

I like it, I could actually understand what you're saying rather than those other mumbling rappers or rappers that just repeat the same words over and over and call it a song.

Some things could need some help, but I like it a lot

sounds good but flow is..

A rap not about sex, drugs, and money? That's a first. I like it

Yo Blueface, mind staying on beat? Also, should lower the instrumental.

Thanks all for feedback, I was trying to not mumble rap. WILL try and improve the flow. Thanks

 

[Ted]

Thanks all for feedback, I was trying to not mumble rap. WILL try and improve the flow. Thanks

It didn’t sound like mumble rap, it was very clean and nice.

 

[Scuzzy]

He’s on beat, only thing is that you need to work on your flow a bit and find your pockets. I suggest taking time to write and record. Sometimes you may write it over a few times before you find the flow to blend with the pockets. If you aren’t sure what pockets are, take some time to look into how beats are structured. Keep posting your tracks to get criticized, and possibly ill hand you one of my beats to use. Good luck!

 

[sugma]

He’s on beat, only thing is that you need to work on your flow a bit and find your pockets. I suggest taking time to write and record. Sometimes you may write it over a few times before you find the flow to blend with the pockets. If you aren’t sure what pockets are, take some time to look into how beats are structured. Keep posting your tracks to get criticized, and possibly ill hand you one of my beats to use. Good luck!

It didn’t sound like mumble rap, it was very clean and nice.

Thanks! I'll make sure to post another one of these when I get the time to write a new song.

 

[sugma]

That's actually good, Couldn't do better myself. gl with your career.

Thanks so much!