Feedback on first Thread design

[Relentless]

 

[Steampunk]

Looks good man but I would change the font to a cleaner font.

 

[Relentless]

Looks good man but I would change the font to a cleaner font.

Oh, I can do that

 

[Kuchy]

Honestly I'm confused on what is going on in the design. It looks like you went trigger happy with waves. Waves are supposed to give an aesthetic feeling, not be your background. Font choice isn't that good as well. Waves have a smooth feeling but the font you have has rough edges. And with that, the "5$" doesn't even look like a 5. Waves are a good thing to have but not necessary to have for every single section of your thread. It will eventually turn out to be cramped. It seems you made the waves then crammed in the text. Try doing this backwards that way you know how big your waves really should be. Considering it's your first, not a bad attempt but just don't go trigger happy with aesthetic things.

 

[Relentless]

Honestly I'm confused on what is going on in the design. It looks like you went trigger happy with waves. Waves are supposed to give an aesthetic feeling, not be your background. Font choice isn't that good as well. Waves have a smooth feeling but the font you have has rough edges. And with that, the "5$" doesn't even look like a 5. Waves are a good thing to have but not necessary to have for every single section of your thread. It will eventually turn out to be cramped. It seems you made the waves then crammed in the text. Try doing this backwards that way you know how big your waves really should be. Considering it's your first, not a bad attempt but just don't go trigger happy with aesthetic things.

When making thread designs ( starting out ) , always find one you like and try recreating it.

This is why I love the feedback subforum, Thanks guys!

 

[Ilay A]

Some parts look spiky, as a scuba Steve, I'm terrified of corners

 

[Relentless]

I recommend downloading Nexabold and NexaLight as font, very clean and sleek font.

What do you use for making the waves?

I draw them

 

[Relentless]

K

 

[DeletedUser372845]

Overall it's a pretty dope design, just make the font easier to read because when its a little messy like this it makes it look cheaper.