Feedback on flat design avatar

[Heaven567]

Hello MC-Market,
I made this flat design avatar for myself in under two hours and I would appreciate any sort of constructive criticism in regards to it.
Thanks! also a rating /10 would be nice

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[Lemino]

Advice section.

 

[FileLost]

Hello MC-Market,
I made this flat design avatar for myself in under two hours and I would appreciate any sort of constructive criticism in regards to it.
Thanks! also a rating /10 would be nice
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4/10 Nice concept I get what you're going for

• Think more about facial shape and positioning.
• Don't necessarily add a hard shadow line in the middle of the face, it looks good on some things.
• The jumper tone is hard to see try making less of a black?
• Add more shadow/highlights detail

Nice work keep it up!

 

[TheCamoWaffle]

Hello MC-Market,
I made this flat design avatar for myself in under two hours and I would appreciate any sort of constructive criticism in regards to it.
Thanks! also a rating /10 would be nice
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5/10. I would recommend making the background a single colour rather than a gradient, also the proportions seem kind of off. Last thing: You should fix the mouth to make it a bit more realistic. It's great for a first try though.