Feedback on Fortnite Montage

[EvanM]

Hi guys. I am searching for feedback on a Fortnite montage that I created. This is my first edit.

The montage can be found here:
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Thanks.
Evxn

 

[KelvinZomer]

For your first edit it looks actually really pretty, keep going man!

 

[aurelia]

It definitely is really good, especially for a first edit! Other than one or two clips where the audio was a little wonky and the text was hard to read, it was awesome. Keep up the great work!