Feedback on future project

[itsfsnow]

Any feedback on my thread design?

It's my first time ever making one btw, it's for an upcoming projected which I want to start

Thanks in advance, ~pocked

 

[hgbf]

Too simple and boring, in my opinion.

 

[itsfsnow]

Too simple and boring, in my opinion.

Thanks for the feedback, maybe you could suggest what I could add?

As I mentioned before, it's my first try ever doing it! Thanks [DOUBLEPOST=1506544750][/DOUBLEPOST]

Font: I love the font, really good choice.

Background: It's basic but I still love it, looks good imo. You could do with a background of some sort on the first box.

Quality: It looks like it's not high quality, maybe medium quality.

The text: On the 2nd box, "WHY AKUMA" you could have gave a brief summary of what Akuma is then go onto listing what
Akuma has. Maybe search "cheap icon" "reliable icon", etc. to put in your design. You could put the icon, then write the "cheap", "reliable", etc either on top, under, or right side or left side by the icon.

The 3rd box: You didn't state what comes in the Standard or Pro. Putting what comes with the packages as well as a price under or on top would be great!

The 4th box: That would look like something that should be in the previous box as stated. You would want it to be as organized as possible.

The 5th box: I believe the prices should be in the 3rd box. The last box could contain your contact information.

This is purely my opinion though, this is not something you should/have to do.

Overall, I love the concept of the design but it does need some work to be in better quality.

Thanks for the great and overall feedback

 

[itsfsnow]

I forgot to ask; when you create these, do you find an image of the color you want and put it in the design and stretch it out if you need to?

Do you use Photoshop?

I use Photoshop, heres what it looks like.. need to organise it all

https://gyazo.com/15ce3da215c247304ed180e29b43b45a