Feedback on my first ever trailer LOOOL

[whatthemus]

Here is my first ever trailer that i made, i know it looks shit but well, YOLO. Got a crappy laptop so the fps wouldnt even run that great :sad
Any feedback would be nice.

 

[Jad]

The worst thing I have ever seen But seriously, you should just not make trailers.

 

[Nrevi]

I r8 8/8

 

[Style]

It's not bad, but you should use a professional-looking font like Bebas Neue and the gameplay should be smoother.