feedback on my first song

[Isource]

guys im a soundcloud rapper

 

[Zorah]

1. I don't want to listen to 20 seconds of music before I hear your voice.
2. Your microphone is very quiet, like. VERY quiet. And it's bad quality.
3. You could work on your flow too.

Not being rude, you asked for feedback so that's what im giving as a listener.

 

[Isource]

1. I don't want to listen to 20 seconds of music before I hear your voice.
2. Your microphone is very quiet, like. VERY quiet. And it's bad quality.
3. You could work on your flow too.

Not being rude, you asked for feedback so that's what im giving as a listener.

tyyy

 

[Isource]

next time make the lyrics focus on something because i am confused now

ye I just thought of things that rhymed lmaoo